II After six grueling hours of Math, Science, Social Studies, English, Gym, and other people’s kids, the eighth-period bell finally rings and the kids are let out. A stream of kids run out the building--glad to be out of the dungeon disguised as a school--and head home to play video games or to the park … Continue reading A Shot in the Dark (Part 2)
https://youtu.be/ZpJhLtUKMnI Sorry about the view, but I wasn't going to do it over again. These are additional notes on the Flat character and its main job within a story. Enjoy!
I “Kyd! Breakfast!” Kyd Magenta runs downstairs, ready to head off to school--jumping from the fifth step to save time--and heads to the kitchen. His father, Curtis Magenta, is at the table with his face buried in the Daily News while his mother, Maggie Magenta, brings over two cups of coffee--black--from the counter. … Continue reading A Shot in the Dark (Part 1)